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Ice by Urnam-BOT

:iconpavrzlove:
HI AGAIN

Cons: The first thing that strikes me is the slopiness of the rocks. It seems as if you put in all your effort to making the leopard look pretty, and just kind of half assed the background. The next thing is the shiny..thing?? in the background. It seriously makes no sense to me and has no purpose there. You could have gotten the same lighting effect if you had put in a moon, and that would have made more sense. Okay next is the snow leopard. The rock that he is standing on is tilted, yet his body is perfectly straight...what? It looks like his right paw had been floating but you just filled it in with black to cover it up. Next is the sky. I would have thought that you would know that a sky is never perfectly black, it has subtle shades of blue which gives it more depth. Last is the lighting/shading whatever. Okay SINCE you used that commet...thing as a lighting source the lighting should not be JUST white. I can see that the commet thing has tints of blue and pink in it as well as green, and that should have subtly been incorporated into the lighting of the rocks and the animal.

Pros: Right, so I like how you did the leopard. The detail is quite impressive, and the fur looks quite wonderful. The fact that you chose to do just rocks in the background appeals to me because it gives the picture depth, but it also doesn't draw away the attention from the main focus, the leopard.

All in all nice job, but like every other artist theres some things you need to improve on~
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19 out of 34 deviants thought this was fair.

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InfiniteLoup Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
Why is this an unfair review, guys? l:l it's a lot more fair than most, who just kiss ass without lending any suggestions to the artist... ughhgughgh
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pavrzlove Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
LMAO

ikr
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:iconurnam-bot:
Urnam-BOT Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
thank you =)
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:iconpavrzlove:
pavrzlove Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
lol np.

your fans seem to think im unfair LMAO.
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:iconurnam-bot:
Urnam-BOT Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
little kids seem to think if it's not 5 stars on everything then it's UNFAAAOORRR
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:iconpavrzlove:
pavrzlove Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
NOO ITS MY STYLE
DUN NEED TO IMPROVE

pft lmao
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